Fine, You Can Have A Bit More...

I'm not quite satisfied with the second to last scene of my story, so the ending part is staying carefully hidden on my hard drive for now. However, since a surprising number of people have been bugging me, I'm posting a link to the middle section of the story. Yes, I did switch the protagonist's real name and her alias around. Davis said I should, and I agreed. Even in sci fi you can only have so many unpronounceable names floating around. It's still a rough draft! And I wrote it, so I have ultimate power! Whoo!